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Fate and Destiny
... are something you can't change
[Testing] 
12th-Apr-2008 07:59 am
Author : underknight

Title : The Gap Between Us

Rating : PG

Disclaimer : Err.. I own them. They are making out in my bath tub now~ Huh… Get real people, do you want to die in Yunho’s hand if we have Jaejoong?

Genre : Romance, angst

Length : Testing ( 1/2 over 10? )

Summary : Sometimes... I wished I never love you...

Author note : Okay, I am testing here people~ This chapter one is splited into two and I gonna post arranged marriage later~. Since many of you want both, you can see each chapter 1 and decided later.

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Comments 
12th-Apr-2008 07:06 am (UTC)
i'm late~ sorry i didn't participate in the voting.
this one is nice, and i'll wait for the other too. based on the preview in your previous post, i like arranged marriage more.
whichever you decide to continue, just go on ^^ you're the writer anyway, so it'll be good if you choose the one that you are more comfortable with.
fighting!
12th-Apr-2008 08:04 am (UTC)
please continue with it!
cos you can't leave joongie alone like that!
and stupid yunnie! so unfeeling:( (totally not used to it)
am i greedy to ask you to do arranged marriage after this?
12th-Apr-2008 08:06 am (UTC)
OHMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Someone save Jae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this one!!! ^___^
Hehehehehe...
12th-Apr-2008 08:21 am (UTC)
please do continue...even though i'm kinda sad of what i think will happen to jae...but still i hope yunho or yoochun will come to his rescue !!!

thanks for sharing <333
12th-Apr-2008 08:50 am (UTC)
can't wait for continue this !
oh no ! let's hope jae doesn't get raped.
12th-Apr-2008 09:36 am (UTC)
this is really good....please save jae....
please continue.....love it
thanks
12th-Apr-2008 10:25 am (UTC)
plz dun let nythin bad happen to poor jae!
he's adi burdened by the hurt dat yunho had caused him! plz!
i like both of the story!
12th-Apr-2008 10:56 am (UTC)
OMG!! This is so excitednerve wrecking but please don't tell me that Jaejoong is raped or I'm gonna come after yo with flying durians...

Sob..Jaejoong has been raped one times too many in fanfics already, please spare him the torture...
12th-Apr-2008 12:37 pm (UTC)
Nyaaaa!!!
Jae!!! Yunho , go to save him quickkk
You don't do this to Jae right , right?***crying***
Love this can't wait next part ***kisses***
12th-Apr-2008 04:35 pm (UTC)
Nooo! Poor Jae :( Kick him in the balls man! The ball! I hope Yunho saves him before it's to late!
12th-Apr-2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
You're not gonna let that monster rape Jae, are you? Tell me you aren't?!
Will Yunho change his mind and go look for Jae at work?
12th-Apr-2008 06:37 pm (UTC)
Even chapter 1 is so intense. I really loved it. Please continue.. Yunho saves him please..
13th-Apr-2008 05:16 am (UTC)
omgomgomg D:
continue please ^^
jae can't be raped TT ^ TT
13th-Apr-2008 04:30 pm (UTC)
please continue soon..i wna noe if jae will be saved.. i dnt wnt him to get raped..=(..aww...
13th-Apr-2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
oh no!!
YUNHO!!PLS SAVE JAE!
hope he will arrive in time and kick the rapist ass!
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